The Screenwriter App Screenplay Test
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Your script is 66% good.
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Your screenplay report
I have read all of my dialogue out loud to see if it sounds OK and is easy to say.This should be a standard part of your screenwriting development. Read your dialogue out loud or, even better, have someone read it out to you. They will have no preconceived ideas of how you intended it to be written. What sounds great in your head often sounds terrible when spoken.
As Harrison Ford once quipped at George Lucas across the studio, “George! You can type this shit, but you sure can't say it. Move your mouth when you're typing.”
The word 'we' regularly appears in the action sections of my script. (for example, 'We see a huge spaceship fly into frame').
The word 'we' is always redundant. Remember, your script is a blueprint, it should be as concise as possible.
Just stick to the facts and describe them as simply as possible. Instead of 'We see the robot move across the room,' simply say, 'The robot moves across the room.' It's far more direct and keeps the reader in the story.
My script has the words 'CUT TO:' at the end of every scene.
Putting CUT TO: at the end of the scene is redundant. It's the end of the scene, of course you are going to cut to something else. All you've done is add an extra page to your screenplay of useless information. Get rid of them!
My character and place names are consistent.
We've all done it; got half-way through an edit and thought of a more appropriate name for a character or location.
Did that happen in this draft? Have you removed all the references to the old names? It's one surefire way to confuse readers if you haven't.
My action sections are littered with expletives.
This is really just a call-out to be sensitive to all the other people that will read your script. Most would accept bad language from characters, but a lot of swearing in your action sequences just makes you look potty-mouthed. Others may find that offensive.